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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2005-02-14 06:54 AM



today is another life
birthing it's noise
to the sky

reaching to our hands
wanting to be lead
and to guide us

straight and narrow
with our eyes closed
to the pretty signs

along the side
of a freeway
of the free ways

that opens our eyes


______________

dark

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-02-14 07:01 AM



And there starts mOnday...



Enjoyed, Sir.

Martie
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2 posted 2005-02-14 09:29 AM


DS  I hope your new day is wonderful!  Thanks for this positive perspective!  
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-02-14 09:45 AM


"today is another life
birthing it's noise
to the sky"

~ How utterly poetic! I enjoyed the spirit of this write.


EA

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with you
4 posted 2005-02-14 11:26 AM


super cool write

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2005-02-14 11:36 AM


yes, indeed, it is

Happy Valentine's Day DS

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2005-02-14 11:50 AM


it is good to see with open eyes babe.

Happy V-Day to you.

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In Your Poetic Mind
7 posted 2005-02-14 01:53 PM


'luv you'....

new days are wonderful for the eyes.....

~~*~~
the wind sings with the calm
tranquilize in the night
sien beauty on my lips
~~**~~

Susan
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walking the surreal
8 posted 2005-02-14 02:43 PM


Peeking in while I've a moment - what lovely eyes you have - and a wise soul- you write sunshine here

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

garysgirl
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9 posted 2005-02-14 03:11 PM


I like this, dark...each day is another day
for us to make our own beginnings....if we
so choose.
Hugs,
Ethel

inkedgoddess
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10 posted 2005-02-14 09:31 PM


beautiful vision
beautiful dreamer
beautiful darkstranger

LeeJ
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11 posted 2005-02-15 12:48 PM


along the side
of a freeway
of the free ways

that opens our eyes


free ways are like that...but then, you know that don't you....rockin motor cycle man....great read

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12 posted 2005-02-25 01:22 AM


eyes wide open~


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