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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2005-02-14 03:34 AM


SIFTING SANDS
~ Linda L. Dowd ~

+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+
When in the morning of our days,
White sands sift slowly through,
The bottle neck of an hour glass,
~ Pristine, and fresh, and new.

The sun climbs high at noontime,
And with it comes full light.
We frolic in the golden rays,
Until the edge of night.

In the evening of our years,
The sands turn burnished brown ~
Rich from what was witnessed,
From life’s each up and down.

When moon does rise in night of days,
We long to slow time’s clock.
But sands slip thru’ the widening gap,
So quickly ~ then, …they stop.

When in the morning of our days,
White sands sift slowly through,
The bottle neck of an hour glass,
~ Pristine, and fresh, and new.
+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+

© Copyright 2005 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2005-02-14 08:34 AM


Earth Angel
A delightful write and a pleasure to read.
LOL How old did you say you were?

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2005-02-14 09:00 AM


Good morning, Mr. T.!

~ As the woman says in the commercial, "How old do you think I am?"

Well, altogether I am thousands of years old! Flirty 2

But in this lifetime I suppose you could say that I am middle age, however, I feel as though I am in my twenties! ~ at least I do on my good days! Flirty


EA

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3 posted 2005-02-14 09:13 AM


Earth Angel
You write like an old angel in a prime body.
Whatever, the mix is delightful.

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2005-02-14 09:28 AM


Mr. T. ~

Why thank you!

Your comment certainly started my Valentine's day off on a fine note! ~ and might I say that the same applies to you as well!?!

I Love You Teddy

EA
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5 posted 2005-02-14 11:34 AM


beautiful reading

Happy Valentine's Day Linda

littlewing
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6 posted 2005-02-14 12:05 PM


and I finally get to see this angel who has been gracing my life for so long.

Beautiful, Linda.

iliana
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7 posted 2005-02-14 01:16 PM


Yes!  And the hour glass is turned over!  You are so clever in this analogy, Linda!   & lots of Valentine Hearts and flowers, lily jo
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8 posted 2005-02-14 01:37 PM


this reminds me of Spring, fresh and new....lovely this.....

~~*~~
the wind sings with the calm
tranquilize in the night
sien beauty on my lips
~~**~~

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9 posted 2005-02-14 05:20 PM


Lovely...James
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10 posted 2005-02-14 07:06 PM


"In the evening of our years,
The sands turn burnished brown ~
Rich from what was witnessed,
From life’s each up and down"


Linda, I love your thinking!  (and of course, your ability to to take the complex and glide it into silken words)

       miscellanea

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11 posted 2005-02-14 07:31 PM


Very beautiful, my friend.
Happy Valentines Day,
Hugs,

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2005-02-15 10:10 AM


p s ~

Thank you for the "beautiful" reply! ~ and for the Valentine wishes!

Big hug,
Linda

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13 posted 2005-02-15 10:11 AM


littlewing ~

Thank you for your kind words, Sue! It was good to hear from you!

Love & Light,
Linda

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14 posted 2005-02-15 10:14 AM


iliana ~

Merci beaucoups, mon ami! Thank you, my friend! ~ and yes, my Valentine's Day was exceptionally romantic! Flowers

Love ya!
Linda

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15 posted 2005-02-15 10:17 AM


Eyes of Green

Yes, everything is like Spring in the morning of our years. ~ and it is wonderful when we are able to have the night years just as fresh and sweet! ~ May this be so for you!

Loves 'n hugs,
Eyes of Blue

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2005-02-15 10:18 AM


James ~

Thank you for your "lovely" reply!

Belated V-Day hug,
Linda

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17 posted 2005-02-15 10:19 AM


misc'e ~

~ and I appreciated reading your own "silken words", sweet poetess!

Hugs with love,
EA

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18 posted 2005-02-15 10:23 AM


garysgirl ~

Well lookie here! Is it you? Is it truly you, Darlin' Ethel Mae! Gosh, I really do miss your once omnipresence here at Pip!

Thanks for popping in to read my poem and saying hello! I hope that you got to see your Honey Bear on Valentine's Day! Mine was especially romantic! Single Yellow Rose

Love you!
Linda Lou

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19 posted 2005-02-15 03:49 PM




(giggles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, dearest angel friend, often I dream and wonder if I was someone else in a previous life and what I may be after I leave this body! (kiss on cheek) I believe the spirits always live and though our skin ages, it never indicates an end of any life, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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20 posted 2005-02-15 04:20 PM


Linda, this is a beautiful poem. I wish I could write like you.
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