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John R
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since 2000-12-14

Posts 141
Toledo OH

0 posted 2005-06-29 09:25 PM

Picking Dandelions

What do you think our chances are,
I asked,
as I picked another dandelion
to ease the cold anxiety
gnawing inside of me?
A wish on a star
never came true.
No voice can ever tell me
why my heart sings,
or how badly I feel the cold
on a sunless eve,
or why I wipe my tears
on my sleeve,
or why I try to escape this existence,
knowing I can’t live without her?
I have looked into her eyes,
and when they were clear,
it was as if one could see his tomorrow.
She was life,
and she was mine for a brief moment.
Now, I like to pick dandelions,
Blow...
and let their wishes go,
watching them float away,
soaring free.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2005-06-29 09:28 PM

John~
It's really nice to see you ...
and this is tenderly touching~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2005-06-29 09:46 PM

John

I wish on dandelions too....sometimes they come true. Keep the faith!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2005-06-29 10:54 PM

everyone tries to get rid of these gifts

but I say, those hardy life-loving dandelions shall still be here when all the pansies are long gone

enjoyed the read!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2005-06-29 11:10 PM

"or why I wipe my tears
on my sleeve,
or why I try to escape this existence,
knowing I can’t live without her?
I have looked into her eyes,
and when they were clear,
it was as if one could see his tomorrow.
She was life,
and she was mine for a brief moment.
Now, I like to pick dandelions,
Blow...
and let their wishes go,
watching them float away,
soaring free"

*sighs*
that was so beautiful

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2005-06-30 01:31 PM

Wow this is beautiful

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

TexUS
Member

since 2003-03-20

Posts 228

6 posted 2005-07-01 12:22 PM

So fragile and heartfelt,
I was touched...

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