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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2005-06-28 06:47 PM



the arms on my watch curve circles in the air
ahead of me the sun approaches dusk
slowly it reaches the great lake  
seeming to sink into the deep blue abyss
where secrets are stored on the ancient ocean floor
from all the reefs and to the unexplored deep
where old pirate treasures sleep without time
long lost gold and blue green jewels of centuries ago
the fish are rich , with my love and copper coins
a wish you made some ten years ago
forgot till now you surly did
the passions of your past
not thinking they would last
so long .... into the now
reality the ever present second that never rests
and always reminds
the sand was between my toes and i didn't care
sometimes slight discomfort leads to grand joy
a leap into the cool glassy aqua
a dip out of this world and into another
the fluid of life itself
what were made of overall
the sun was now below the horizon
soon to be night
and filled with stars from afar
they twinkle onward as the moon takes to the stage
    
    
        
      
    
-JW III -
-5/28/2005-



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1 posted 2005-06-28 07:05 PM


Very nice write here James.
Love the imagery.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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2 posted 2005-06-28 08:36 PM


ahhh the moon, the stars, the ocean....

beautimous jussy

m

drove me like a magnet
to the sea

~stevie nicks~

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3 posted 2005-06-28 08:56 PM


i am soooo smiling right now

enchanted one ....glad you liked
the images ...they seem to be my
style so much to describe and i am
trying to add in real events
so its like a little story too ..hugs ,and thanks n

m ,  
sweet i love beautimous....sounds
so studious...
woof woof hugs too
....J

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4 posted 2005-06-28 11:31 PM


absolutely loving this write

"sometimes slight discomfort leads to grand joy"
absolutely!

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5 posted 2020-09-02 11:06 AM


Thank you!
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