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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2005-02-25 05:51 AM


Who moves smoothly through dreams?
like paper boats on raven streams?
ebony the night does turn,
searing heat of heart does burn.

Spectre like, i feel a vibe,
from where it came i cannot ascribe?
Moving with me, just out of range,
in sun's shadow, amber and orange.

Rustle of leaves in colding ice,
nobody there? Makes me think twice.
Swish of skirt flaps out behind me,
echoing laughter, with no one to see.




Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2005-02-25 05:29 PM


A lonely vibe, this dream~
Perhaps it's best when we wake up after all.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2005-02-25 05:40 PM


kinda sad, but good write
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-02-25 06:19 PM


extrasensory - like the haunting feel -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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