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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-02-25 05:36 AM


Cross the grassy meadow,
forward over the bridge,
streams of viridescent and white,
pass beneath your feet.

Through the gate and up the hill,
hear the cuckoo calling.
Turn and look at the clouds,
floating slowy in azure.

Though the sun shines,
crisp nips the spring air.
Velvet emerald feels the
primrose leaves, scattered.

Pass by the hedgerow,
enter the woodland of
echoing silence, greying shades,
here you will find me.

Leaning against nature,
nothing more do we need.
You have arrived where we belong,
look into the hole, that's our future.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2005-02-25 05:53 AM


look into the hole, that's our future.

This was a great line, I could see two people peeking into their future together...even though a hole is dark and empty, I hope their future is not....but I understand what you meant, like a magical hole inside a tree trunk...

~ARH

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard


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