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As I Sip Tea With Churchill
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As I Sip Tea With Churchill |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa 
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While singing songs with mermeids Deep within the sea The doctors cast their nets for Simple, silly, me While battling with martians Far away in space A doctor probes the surface Of my head and face As I capture Leprechauns All across the lands The doctors pin me down and Clamp my feet and hands While on a stage with demons In my bathroom robe A doctor flicks the switch to Shock my "evil" lobe While hiding with a turtle In his private shell The doctors wheel me into My own padded cell As I sip tea with Churchill Back in World War II A doctor tells another What he now must do While Sigmund reassures me It is id, not I The doctors all agree to Ratify his lie While witnessing how Alice Grew to ten feet tall A doctor fills my veins with A dose of Demerol And so, I face The Ripper's Blade of sanity Which steals my piece of mind through A lobotomy "I have gone away. The bed is cold and empty. Trees bend their boughs toward the earth. And nighttime birds float as black faces." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Welcome back to Passions interesting username you have too [This message has been edited by passing shadows (06-22-2005 01:03 AM).] |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
amazing the wonderful things such medications can bring ... lol |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Great first post.Enjoyed this read very much so. Welcome to Passions. Hope to read more of your work. :-) <^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome! It's nice to have new poets in here! It was a neat read for sure  |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Awsome I ewill Have to keep an eye out for you .... Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Welcome to passions. If you step to the right, you'll join the line of previously lobotomized, which will spare you the anguish of being lobotomized twice, but will also decrease your medication dosage. (I know, I know, it was a toss up for me too.  ) Enjoyed the 'debut'. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I hear the pain doesn't last long, and only hurts when you smile! *Welcome* JCP~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
one never strays too far from home, no matter where one moves  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Welcome here or welcome back whichever it may be.... There's a couple poets in this thread that seem to know who you are.... Either way I thouroghly enjoyed the poem and love the username....Soundgarden fan by chance??? Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Enjoyed this very much! Welcome to PiP!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Soundgarden? Hmmmm. What about Opeth, maybe? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome..or welcome back, whichever it may be. This is very well written and much enjoyed. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Seems to me this is destined to become a classic! Welcome to Passions! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
JCPose....I enjoyed this first post. Welcome to Passions! |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
Thanks everyone for reading and replying. And to those who have welcomed me back to Passions, like Dixie, I don't have the time now, but will expand my reply at a later time. I appreciate it, everyone. "I have gone away. The bed is cold and empty. Trees bend their boughs toward the earth. And nighttime birds float as black faces." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
no need to expand...just glad to have you home |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Welcome Home...  I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Interesting work watch out for those doctors they don't always have your best interests in mind. Looking forward to more from you adagio |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
WOW!!! I had better watch myself...if they find out about the fairies flying around my room I am a goner...*hugs* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
JCP, you are AOK in EA's books! ~ and please say "Hi!" to Churchill for me! You are as nutzoid as I am! ~ and I like nuts!  Truly enjoyed the read! Love & Light, EA |
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