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Sun of faith
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since 2003-01-31
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0 posted 2005-06-27 03:41 AM


The sane part of my inner-self is slowly but surley fading, As this insanity hits me with such tremendous force.

I Fall

And thoe sleep brings the hope of a new day I am yet to smile, Because i know I will feel the same madness that brings me down daily.

I Weep

Finding a source of resurrection is difficult but can be found, Knowing I will always have my dreams and the promises I have made myself.

I WILL ARISE


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Beki
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since 1999-09-15
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1 posted 2005-06-27 04:00 AM


love the hope displayed in this
Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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2 posted 2005-06-27 07:30 AM


Yes, you will arise and when you're up, you'll simply go further up.  Hold on to that thought ... always.
froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
3 posted 2005-06-29 12:09 PM


Know this feeling quite well.
Enjoyed the read.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05
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Ca
4 posted 2005-06-29 12:48 PM


It only gets better from here.

Love this.

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
5 posted 2005-06-30 01:34 PM


Wow I like this alot very different.
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