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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2005-02-24 12:48 PM



We do not speak
but watch with
distant eyes as
portals close

too many last glances
too many lost chances
too many watery reds
from trying to read
between lines that bleed

we do not speak
but deep within
I suppose

hearts whisper still...


~tier

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1 posted 2005-02-24 12:54 PM


this is sooo excellent...
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2005-02-24 01:13 PM


You haven't lost your touch! You still have the ability to move me to tiers ~ I mean, "tears"...


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3 posted 2005-02-24 01:24 PM


dang!
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just out of reach
4 posted 2005-02-24 01:36 PM


Wow !!

Cloud 9
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5 posted 2005-02-24 04:19 PM


Yes!! I like this one.
littlewing
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6 posted 2005-02-25 11:38 AM


yes, they do Tier, and I wish I had written this, the whole thing, actually:

too many last glances
too many lost chances
too many watery reds
from trying to read
between lines that bleed



ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2005-02-27 11:09 AM


Humbling in it's precise and soft spoken echo.
TD

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