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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-06-08 12:19 PM



Break Up


I would give my all to you,
my heart, my desires, the
pleasure of my day.

Yet you choose to be distant,
to push me far, far away.

Don't know what else to do.
I want to break up with you.


JamesLee
June08
2005

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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
1 posted 2005-06-08 03:28 AM


when we give so much and center on the different things we have to share

      .... we have all ready been broken ....

            ... love is meant to be an all or nothing thing .....


                        sorry for any grief,
                         I can ... relate.

SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453

2 posted 2005-06-08 12:14 PM


It is not pleasant being in a place where hard decesions must be made. Well written and thought provoking.

SG

Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05
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Ca
3 posted 2005-06-08 12:28 PM


things like this are never easy...

((hugs))

Sami

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2005-06-08 12:29 PM




Linda

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2005-06-09 04:56 AM


heart-hugs to you James
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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6 posted 2005-06-09 08:23 AM


perhaps she just needs space...a little time off to herself...?  try being her friend, and not her lover, for just a little while...???  Hugs
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