navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #35 » "Nine Tenths" ( Docs' Law)
Open Poetry #35
Post A Reply Post New Topic "Nine Tenths" ( Docs' Law) Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Dr.Moose1
Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2005-06-06 05:44 PM


We write as if were someone in control,
a "Puppet Master" pulling on our strings,
to fill the "Void" , a great, big, empty, hole,
or some such other nonsense, that's the thing.

So each of us should do our very best,
to find that other "tenth" 'cuz we're possessed!



© Copyright 2005 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
1 posted 2005-06-06 05:51 PM


Doc...

"So each of us should do our very best,
to find that other "tenth" 'cuz we're possessed!

Ain't that the truth!  

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2005-06-06 06:03 PM


What's up, Doc? Carrots

Forgive me, I couldn't help myself!

Deer Moose, I mean "Dear" Moose, I always enjoy reading Doc's Laws! There are very interesting and have undertones of wisdom and humour.

Mind you, I personally tend to write because I am bursting at the seams with schtuff! I have to get it out or I would burst like a balloon! Balloons

I always enjoy your work!

Sending you a big, warm hug,
EA

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom
3 posted 2005-06-06 07:36 PM


If only it were just a tenth!
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #35 » "Nine Tenths" ( Docs' Law)

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary