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Snow
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0 posted 2005-06-04 10:26 AM




"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

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Aleta
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1 posted 2005-06-04 11:01 AM


Oh La!  Sensual write ~
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2 posted 2005-06-04 11:43 AM


Passion in refined outfit.

Very captivating.

Love, Margherita

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softly sensual and very beautiful!
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4 posted 2005-06-11 07:39 PM


thank you all very much for the comments on this one.

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

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5 posted 2005-06-14 09:01 AM


"being well versed in moan"...

Oh, yes... perfect lyrics for the dance... *S*

I like this sensual beauty very much!!

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6 posted 2005-06-16 12:10 PM


Nice...James
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7 posted 2005-06-16 01:43 AM


Another beautiful piece, so artfully presented.  Lovely!


~* Carpe' Diem *~

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8 posted 2005-06-16 02:17 AM


since rnbow is not a member here (she's thinking about it though) i'll say thank you for the comments on this piece from us both.

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

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9 posted 2005-06-16 10:40 AM


beautiful
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10 posted 2005-06-16 10:55 AM


Sensually perfect in thought and feel...A masterpiece of thoughts....*hugs*

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11 posted 2005-06-16 02:03 PM


I loved the title and the words!


~tier

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12 posted 2005-06-16 03:30 PM


Hello everyone

Snow has requested that I leave a "thank you" note on her poetry to all that have read and replied. She is not ignoring anyone...sadly, she cannot post right now.

Snow, you are missed. I do hope you will return soon.

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13 posted 2005-06-16 03:47 PM


snowy ,
this sizzles ""HoT""
i want to read it again
and again ..... soon i will bop over
to the castle for a little pen and paper
action ...lol later wolf ...and hugs too

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14 posted 2005-06-17 09:11 AM


A challenge from Ed -- spend a moment today, thinking about how we should treat a good person who is one of PiP's finest poets....if not this one, then one of your choice....it seems we need to.
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