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CastleGuard
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0 posted 2005-05-18 11:50 AM



floating...
rising on the lift
of your effervescent joy
tickled to the gate of heaven -
there I inhale the vapour of your laughter...

CG

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adagio
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since 2005-03-19
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1 posted 2005-05-18 12:40 PM


Wonderfull! Reminds me of someone that I know
adagio

p.s. I enjoy laughter too, and making others laugh.

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-05-18 01:04 PM


made me feel like a child, romping and giggling,,,enjoyed
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2005-05-18 01:06 PM


CG ~ that was downright delightful!!!


EA

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2005-05-18 02:34 PM


made me smile
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2005-05-18 03:04 PM


Inhale all you desire, for I have bundles more in store for you...

~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

CastleGuard
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6 posted 2005-05-18 03:44 PM


Thank you for the delightful responses.

ARH - your laughter is the oxygen for my flame...

CG

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2005-05-19 07:14 AM


Your flame ignites my fire~
c'mon baby light my fire (not angry just flaming hot)LOL!

~Thy Fiery Lady


"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

CastleGuard
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8 posted 2005-05-19 11:00 AM



"...try to set the night on fire..."

Troy is burning...



CG

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