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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-02-22 07:27 AM



Dry Alone

Your reign has wet me skin and bone
With over tones of dry alone
And touches me the taste of vain
With over tones of sheer inane

How could the rain not reach its goal?
And shy away the touch of soul
How could the wet turn dry to dust?
Although the filter made of trust

I feel the wind that blows my sail
And sail my ship to no avail
My guiding star has lost is wink
This reign will cause my ship to sink

My crown is brown with tarnished gold
My rope and sinew shred of old
My ego flies a grey of sky
And underneath a desert lie

It’s only in my dreams of yore
The dessert blooms a flowered floor



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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-02-22 07:36 AM


It’s only in my dreams of yore
The dessert blooms a flowered floor


oh, I beg to differ, goes much much deeper then that...like you, you are our flowered floor, ceiling and the whole kitencabultal...(spelling)?  

Good Morning Sy....wishing you and yours a very lovely day....

More snow on its way up here, so enjoy the warm

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2005-02-22 07:49 AM


LeeJ
Good morning sweet, thanks for the read and sweet comment. I never seem to fly on the same level but go up and down. I guess it's part of flying. LOL

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2005-02-22 07:52 AM


Your reign has wet me skin and bone
With over tones of dry alone
And touches me the taste of vain
With over tones of sheer inane

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Your poetry has the same effect on me.


That verse is so cool I gotta wear me mittens to type! lol ....

now...about this part....

My guiding star has lost is wink
This reign will cause my ship to sink



lost its winkies????
OH No..that just wont do...
So Im sending extra winkies to you.

        

one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ...
~ take only memories ... leave only footprints ~

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2005-02-22 07:59 AM


JM,
Who could not know you were born a winkie.
Wrapped in silver foil like a

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2005-02-22 08:11 AM


Oh, my, Mr. T., thy crown be not brown
for ye be of gold and will never grow old!


I shall be your star that  twinks
  And may yours sleeps have peaceful winks.

With angel wind I shall fill your sails
  Your ship will never fight prevails.

May your days reflect dreams of sweet
  Where flowers bloom and birds do tweet.
  
~ Sending you a potion lotion of devotion!

EA
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2005-02-22 09:07 AM


Morning dear Sy!
Methinks what you need is a good hot cup of Chai tea.
I'm off to brew us a pot straight away!
~Morning hugs and something to warm you, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

passing shadows
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7 posted 2005-02-22 09:43 AM


good morning Sy

you are in good company

suthern
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8 posted 2005-02-22 01:01 PM


My crown is brown with tarnished gold
My rope and sinew shred of old
My ego flies a grey of sky
And underneath a desert lie

It’s only in my dreams of yore
The dessert blooms a flowered floor

Oh, my friend... your poetry never fails to please me... this touches deeply. *S*

Sunshine
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9 posted 2005-02-22 01:07 PM


I have witnessed rain to fall
but hit the heat of such hot wall
it disappeared before me, mist
such as a dream from fevered kiss...

~*~

Inspire me, why don't you?



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