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Martie
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0 posted 2005-02-21 11:59 AM




February 21, Every Year


Today you emerged
from hibernation.
I felt you tapping
the shoulder
of my memory.

Look, you said,
I am
swept under the heartbeat
of memory, sleeping,
covered by hours
then by days
finally by years
until my laughter
fades from memory
and the sound of my voice
is lost.

I am only noticed
when February cuts into
your heart
or in my picture
one sided and posed.

You look for me
across the mountain top
as if my ashes are what
seed the ground
and I can feel
the pilgrimage
of your feet
upon my soul.

Your heart beat
is me
and the ache
in womb
the full blue vained
breast of remembering
is where you can find me
and I will always be there
trust your tears.
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Reposted every year in loving memory of Michelle







© Copyright 2005 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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2 posted 2005-02-21 12:06 PM


I am only noticed
when February cuts into
your heart
or in my picture
one sided and posed.

I've read this beautiful tribute many times now... and the heartbreak of it never lessens.

But... however much February cuts a mother's loving heart into shreds... it doesn't own her... or you. She's with you... and with all of us who know her through your words... Love stays... each time you smile for no particular reason... every time you breathe in the beauty of the day... each time a star seems to twinkle just for you... every time the breeze blows your hair and leaves fresh in your lungs... all through the year.

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3 posted 2005-02-21 12:16 PM


You know how I feel about this, and my hopes for you....peace, love and joy.

My thoughts are with you today, Martie.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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4 posted 2005-02-21 12:28 PM


praying for you today especially
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5 posted 2005-02-21 12:30 PM


OH..Sweetie...this is such a beautiful tribute to Michelle!!     

Hugs, sweet Martie...

Thinking of you and praying for you!! -- Becka

The miracle is you're here,
and the miracle is you're loved...
Even if you're the last on earth
you're loved from up above!!

--  Becka Morgan

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6 posted 2005-02-21 12:30 PM


warm hugs of understanding-

  S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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7 posted 2005-02-21 01:00 PM


~Hugging you in my heart~

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8 posted 2005-02-21 01:05 PM


holding you in thoughts and prayers...hugs dear one!
Love Lee J.

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9 posted 2005-02-21 05:54 PM



Reaching out with a big tender hug, dear Martie.

Your connection of love beyond time and space is precious also to our hearts through the wonderful words you share.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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10 posted 2005-02-21 05:58 PM


"Your heart beat
is me"

...of course...

*smile*

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11 posted 2005-02-21 06:23 PM



~A gentle understanding smile and a hug~

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12 posted 2005-02-21 07:32 PM


  A beautiful memorial.  
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13 posted 2005-02-21 07:35 PM


Martie,Today is a day we share.  I thought of you this morning remembering how you always were sad on this day.  Today for me is the anniversary of my marriage.  Hope today was a good day full of memories, good and bad.  I always enjoy this poem of Michelle.  God bless. Gina
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14 posted 2005-02-21 09:39 PM


I am
swept under the heartbeat
of memory,



and from those memories and your love comes some of the most beautiful and touching poetry I've ever read.


one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ...
~ take only memories ... leave only footprints ~

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15 posted 2005-02-21 11:44 PM


No constructive critiques for this beauty.  Wall to wall love here, Martie.  Hugs, Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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16 posted 2005-02-22 02:12 PM


from your memories and love we learn of a great bond.....heart hugssss Martie.....and thank you

~~*~~
I'm Standing on a bridge
I'm waitin in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now
Theres nothing but the rain
~~**~~

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17 posted 2005-02-22 02:18 PM


heart hugs hon...
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18 posted 2005-02-22 02:19 PM


touching... Though the pain, isn't it glorious we have our special memories?    

      love and hugs,
          miscellanea

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19 posted 2005-02-22 02:31 PM


And through this, she'll always live
Hugs and prayers to you my friend

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20 posted 2005-02-22 02:37 PM


sending hugs
have no words today

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21 posted 2005-02-22 03:32 PM


Martie - I am moved beyond words.  Life is so very hard to understand. Love to you at this time of remembrance.  
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22 posted 2005-02-22 04:48 PM


Beautiful...

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23 posted 2005-03-02 07:01 PM


Martie - this is so very special as it is each year you post it - Paul
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24 posted 2005-03-02 07:08 PM


Martie,
Separated by two days and many years are our Michelles yet bonded are you and I in memories, heartache and loss. But united in hope and wisdom. How you bless my aching heart.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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