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CastleGuard
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Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2005-05-06 02:54 AM



Man asked Time to take a stand —
Was the Perfect Woman ever found,
Ever walked upon the farthest land,
Ever touched upon the solid ground?
Has She ever danced on wave-kissed sand,
Her song echoed a velvet sound?

Man will tempt the earthly span,
The sky; the mountains; oceans chart,
The World to search within his plan...
— Yet She all times of him is part,
The Perfect Woman close to man,
Of each man searching for her heart.

Inside of him She slowly stole;
The art of each man’s own creation;
The vision of his heart and soul,
The image of his formulation.
The rights; the wrongs; his fated role,
Each man bound to his own station.

For She is what you unknown claim,
The Spirit that your thoughts admire.
For She is there – your friend, your dame,
Your guiding light, your sweet desire;
She’s there with every glance you aim;
She is sole Judge; She rules by fire.

And the day will come in time revealed,
When woman of the Earthly norm
With truth and love dissolves your shield —
And your Perfect Woman will transform,
Approving - and Her choice then sealed
She’ll merge within that Earthly form...

...And there within She’ll remain bound
— The Perfect Woman you have found...

CG

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2005-05-06 05:58 AM


Perfect words from a perect soul of a man~

~Love ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-05-06 07:09 AM


excellent!
Jaime Fradera
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Where no tyranny is tolerable
3 posted 2005-05-18 08:41 PM


O, this is sssssso beautiful ...
Yes I believe she lives with and in each of us all too.

MGROVES
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4 posted 2005-05-18 09:55 PM


beautifully put~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Brad_Smith
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since 2004-01-09
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Dallas, Texas
5 posted 2005-05-19 08:36 AM


GREAT write!

I believe I have found the perfect woman and I have faith that I will get a chance again to hold her and walk through love's fire together.

Good luck to you and yours, a touching write

LeeJ
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6 posted 2005-05-19 08:39 AM


simply lovely
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2005-05-23 12:30 PM


Thank you again for this~
Your words for me are PERFECT! (Her song echoed a velvet sound?)(She rules by fire.)(With truth and love dissolves your shield )(The Spirit that your thoughts admire.
For She is there – your friend, your dame,
Your guiding light, your sweet desire;
She’s there with every glance you aim)

(
~Thy Fiery Lady


"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2005-05-23 09:44 PM


So very beautiful...much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

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