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Open Poetry #35

Swallowed (acrostic)

PazSqual
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 71

0 posted 2005-05-05 02:29 PM

Standing on a horizon
Where reality and dreams meet
Awake in one, having everything
Lost in the other, holding nothing
Longing to cross the barrier
Overwhelmed by fantasy
While withering in reality
Enveloped in darkness
Drowning in emptiness

adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

1 posted 2005-05-05 03:40 PM

Very good. meant a lot to me.

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

2 posted 2005-05-05 04:04 PM

Really well written....I enjoyed!

INclan

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-05-05 04:06 PM

Very well written and much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
-Danny Kaye

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2005-05-05 07:16 PM

Well done Paz...
What a beautiful morning!
TD

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2005-05-06 01:14 AM

There's a lot to suck up here without choking.

The aftertaste is familiar, as much as I hate to admit it.

Good stuff, PazSqual~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-05-06 07:24 PM

enjoyed this

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2005-05-06 07:41 PM

Nice poem.

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