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Voice Of Allure (Siren Song)
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Voice Of Allure (Siren Song) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Alluring she is with voice of tranquil, such soothing gently rocking in melodic sway, she slowly rolls into my soul It is her grace that captivates my gaze turned in appreciation of the most beautiful vision I have ever seen... only she can bring me to my knees. I would linger there in her serene embrace to memorize her scent, her touch her spirit her sound... Alone, within her I am found she compliments my completeness Holding my dreams she tastes my tears softly she whispers those whispers that calm my fears her siren song she sings to me leaving me ever longing for her seas. I really want to care, I want to feel something, let me dig a little deeper nah, still nothing~ my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Oh my - this is beautiful in its longing and eloquence - you do magic my friend -  SIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I would linger here in her serene embrace to memorize her scent, her touch her spirit her sound... Alone, within her I am found ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ you know I right there with ya... there is nothing that can effect me more than the tides... I miss the ocean like I miss breathing... beautiful devotion of words poetess Donna. You captured the allure and serene in your lovely verse. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
B E A U T I F U L !!!! Wonderful write filled with genuine passion. ~Hugs~Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all my friends, and Janet, thank you for the beautiful inspire through your fantastic photography skills. Absolutely lovely! I really want to care, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Donna, its been a pretty crappy day, more so now, since I snapped and unloaded on a friend...and then I came upon this, your words are so full of promise...to me, and for me, the ocean is life...and you've captured it incredibly, thank you...hugs |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
If a note or a glimpse Beauty can be entrancing You touch the senses here Well done Gloom |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow Donna, you do the ocean proud, i'm looking out my window now and I see it, swelling and beaming with pride.  truly a beautiful piece m'gentle one. it's a  Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you each, so very much.. now damn Maree, pass the tissues... you went and made me misty... your words touch. I really want to care, |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
beautiful....eloquent and beautiful sigh |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
JB, and Vandana, thank you both ladies. I appreciate you all!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestSpiritGal~ You pen such beautifully wistful thoughts~ Just LOVELY~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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