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Monday Morning Coldness
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Monday Morning Coldness |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Monday Morning Coldness Winter is clinging, the only warmth in a mind trying to pilot what can't be. Wanting to shed the layers of impossiblity, watching the tabled iris' close up in freeze position waiting for a flashback of yesterday and a residue of tenderness to loosen up the curves. The mind is twisted in retreat revealing nothing, yet everything, as the mirror whispers the secrets in a mist that is weighted into droplets sliding down the face of today. "Deprived for too long, with darkness on the rise, the dreams are too subtle and delivery stands the test of time, as I am worded in reflection still waiting to reveal my heart." Blinded by thoughts (too many) often skipping that beat that would take me into the world of you, I am feeling the air today holding onto memories to warm the way. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes memories are all we have against the last winter chill hope you stay warm  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sometimes the memories give us so much joy wonderfully written and felt |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
again...my pilot is out..just when I need it at 40 degrees outside and barely 50 in here... so much for the repairs of a few months ago... thought I wouldn't be needing it for another 6 months or so. A warmly dressed M waiting for the "heat man"  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Lots of clever thinking on such cold day! I think this was brilliantly written. Hoping it warms up soon! ~miscellanea |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The "man's" on the way~~~~ or so he says M |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
The illusion of heat, so sweet Yet the bones chill until Repairs are again made and paid, Ahhh the joys of the home are known By what is spent, in payment Gloom summer is soon |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Ahhh the joys of the home are known By what is spent, in payment ... or in what is owed~~~ sighing but getting warmer Me |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Amen to some understated words Dave |
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