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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
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0 posted 2005-04-21 07:41 AM


your nails are lovely
especially when wet that way
yes it is ok to lick

to make the end slippery
and the sides too
the saliva helps

when snug and thick
are not compatible
and shall I hold it up

while you lower down
press harder if you wish
it won't bend in the middle

let it bottom out please
just one time let it hilt
til the pink is buried deep

and the empty is binged full

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dark  scribblenote: combined efforts of pink pearl eraser cap installation on number 2 globe pencil


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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-04-21 07:43 AM


chuckling here....

yeah,
you knew I'd love it....

yer better than a cup of coffee
in the morning, ya know???  

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-04-21 08:28 AM


uhhhh huh


Martie
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3 posted 2005-04-21 10:42 AM


DS....Thanks for the smile!  
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
4 posted 2005-04-21 10:45 AM


Only you could make an eraser and a pencil sing with *sin*sual *sin*sations - and make a woman tingle at the thought of a #2 lead in combinations with a pin pearl - oh, you do work your word magic -- mmmmmmmm -

Morning my deliciously wicked D - S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

SEA
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with you
5 posted 2005-04-21 07:18 PM


"when snug and thick
are not compatible"

not compatible? no such thing....
enjoyed the write, but I sure as heck wasn't picturing a pencil and eraser

MGROVES
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6 posted 2005-04-21 07:40 PM


where can a person find a pencil like
that? lmao

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above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2005-04-21 09:25 PM


cool
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