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0 posted 2005-04-20 09:28 PM


It is not I that brings the summer’s breeze,
nor I that gently lets the leaf float lazily
upon the stream...

For I am but I...one small speck of an
ocean’s sand, a tiny glimmer of a sun’s
ray...a single chirp of a thousand birds,
I am.

And I know, yes....I know that you are
to me so much more....the glade of
green that quietly sits in wait of your
dance.   The cloud that shadows your
step, calling me.   The cry of a loon,
distantly calling, yearning to hear in
return that one sound...and I...

I sit alone, feeling the tremor of a
heart’s throb,   sensing the sigh that
clutches my throat, trembles my
hands and squirms me..

And I wish, oh do I wish...to bask
upon that star that is your eyes,
to touch the Milky Way, ride a
comet’s tail...and more...as long as
you are there....holding tight to me...
Even in my dreams....

© Copyright 2005 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2005-04-20 09:59 PM


WOW!
passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-04-20 10:46 PM


even in my dreams

yes!

MGROVES
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3 posted 2005-04-21 02:39 AM


another WOW~

   WOW~    WOW~

  oh sooo nice~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-04-21 09:11 AM


REMARKABLE!


Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2005-04-21 09:34 AM


Barry,
Yes, even in your dream. Well done

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