Cuspidate Love Hastens Seductive Lips

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EvocativeVerse2
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0 posted 2005-02-19 10:47 PM

Cuspidate Love Hastens Seductive Lips

Northern lights gild us in amethyst dreams,
Hue’ our twilight’s in scintillating lace,
For ours is the hush of clear flowing streams,
Liquid verses of song the heart doth chase.

Along the boundary of rich longing,
Tout-de-suite our hearts must ever be one,
To stirring hours we’ll wed belonging,
Need pressed to want ere upsurges the sun.

Cuspidate love hastens seductive lips,
It crowds appetite to the void of night,
‘Tis the waltz of the sphere round her ellipse—
—The incandescence of our sweet delight.

Look to the Heavens for there falls’ a star,
And the wish it brings to thee from afar.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2005-02-19 10:56 PM

talk about lovely use of color - the northern lights in amathyst - mmmmm - how yummie is that -

I do so enjoy falling into the magic of your words - well done my friend

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

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2 posted 2005-02-19 11:05 PM

Thank-you Susan. Yummie! I like the sound of that word. My poetry is not half as good as yours dear friend...but I appreciate the kindness of your words.

Snow

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since 2000-10-16

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desert flower looking for rain

3 posted 2005-02-20 12:00 PM

.... i just don't have the words.

love, S~

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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4 posted 2005-02-20 12:32 PM

~sigh~ Kevin, talk about some dreamy language... a romantic write of days gone by.

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

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5 posted 2005-02-20 12:51 PM

Thank-you Snow...I know it has to be good if I stole your words. LOL!

Thank-you Midnitesun. I am really glad you liked this. I have been playing with the original idea for almost a week...and finally today decided it just had to be a sonnet. Of course having read today that the sonnet has existed in its basic accepted form for 450 years earlier this afternoon might have had a lot to do with it. LOL! I was at the book store today and bought a copy of The Oxford Book of Sonnets. Finding it to be a great read...and really enjoying following the progression of the sonnet over the past 450 years. Besides with greats such as Shakespeare, Frost, and W.B. Yeats all having wed its form to their poetry at one point or another...I think maybe it has stood the test of time...and masters.

Thank-you everyone for taking the time to read this. I really appreciate it!

froggy
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