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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2005-04-19 08:16 AM



you said you liked satin
the sound of it
when it slid over your skin

and when it got caught
between us on the magic
when we made wrinkles

you said they would never
come out either
like those other things

we had pressed between us
and then just kept them there
until they became permanent
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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-04-19 08:23 AM


and it is those things which makes life so gentile...couldn't help but think of faux painting while I was reading this...sorry, it's my frame of mind and your creative touch which formed the visionary....enjoyed!


Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2005-04-19 10:10 AM


and when it got caught
between us on the magic
when we made wrinkles


mmm...wrinkles....
magic ones at that...

wanna make a few wrinkles of our own??  

Enjoyed this one babe.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Susan
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3 posted 2005-04-19 10:17 AM


satin - yes D - I love satin and all it says and feels - for that is how you have wrapped me -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2005-04-19 11:01 AM


Thanks to you ladies

Lee J you are a pleasure song to view
with your replies


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donna...you are so naughty, come sit beside me and whisper more (grin) thanks babe


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soothsin, satin only needs a shadow to wear the dawn water..let me shadow you til we are oceans, thanks hon

Martie
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5 posted 2005-04-19 01:08 PM


DS

I'm kinda partial to cotton myself....cotton or air!  Your satin words always sound sweet though!  

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2005-04-19 01:55 PM


your words do slide softly through the mind~~

enjoyed
M

Cloud 9
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7 posted 2005-04-19 01:59 PM


I love satin but I don't think the sheets would be there by the time we got done to even see the wrinkles.....

***grin*** kidding  

I loved this

Indigo
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8 posted 2005-04-19 06:17 PM


memories embossed
like sensitive pleasure welts,
mind skin remembers.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2005-04-19 06:43 PM


ms martie, a pleasure to feel the silk of your touch, thanks neighbor

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ms MM'z always a treat to see the smooth side of your touch thank  you

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sexy nine, thanks to you for the tease ease
I appreciate your reads

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ms indi dance close with the memory music
let it leave the poems in welt write ache
thank you lady friend


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10 posted 2005-04-19 06:46 PM




   nice feel to this~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2005-04-19 06:50 PM


mmm ms groves, thanks for
feeling of it
that way


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