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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2005-04-18 11:45 PM



Please tell me what you did
was pure and true

Please tell me when you said your
sorry you said it cause you really knew
what was at stake

Please tell me your inttentions are pure and
true and aren't fake

For I can not handle another shame of feelings
my soul is bruised battered and beaten

I'm down to my last short fuse and please
don't turn out to be the one that egnites it.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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1 posted 2005-04-18 11:47 PM


very  good~

  

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Foxyoasis
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2 posted 2005-04-18 11:51 PM


thank you

that is my doubts setting in lol it sucks i hate thinking this way but so many men have treated me badly saying words that are empty and im just afraid it will happen again.

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3 posted 2005-04-19 12:11 PM


i know that, i have seen my fears come out and totally chase em away. dont need no more empty words for their greed needs, no more pain  got enough scars and wounds still healing.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Foxyoasis
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4 posted 2005-04-19 02:24 AM


amen to that lol

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


passing shadows
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5 posted 2005-04-19 05:18 AM


yes. I understand
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