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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2005-04-18 11:38 PM



The hallowness that confides
me to the room of my dark place

I am no more dressed in lace
no fancy clothes for me
just tattered rags made out
of old tapestries.

The thoughts run through my mind
like some on going time bomb
waiting and waiting for someone
to push the button

On edge most everyday I hope
this feeling goes away went to the
doctor got a medication a new addiction
for me now gee thank's

We live in a nation where pills seem
to deam our lives

This is my last hope down the hatch it
goes disolve my salvation

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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1 posted 2005-04-18 11:41 PM




      sending a big hug to you~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Foxyoasis
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2 posted 2005-04-18 11:42 PM


thank you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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