navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #35 » Swirling Minds and Tired Finds
Open Poetry #35
Post A Reply Post New Topic Swirling Minds and Tired Finds Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-04-15 07:22 PM



Swirling Minds and Tired Finds

So much going on, leading
to happy thoughts
and swirling minds, wondering
if my fortune
"the star of riches is shining on you"
was worth the opening of the second one:
"You will always have good luck
in your personal affairs."
Either way, I enjoyed the cookies

M

( silly, I know )

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2005 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-04-15 07:27 PM


Fortune cookies are always good for a smile..
and ya just never know M.
Hugs~N.

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2005-04-15 07:30 PM


Busy, Busy, Busy "things are looking up"
Thanks, Nancy

M

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2005-04-15 08:15 PM



icebox
Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
4 posted 2005-04-15 09:19 PM


I enjoyed the title...very much!
bslicker
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321
state of mind
5 posted 2005-04-16 12:10 PM



Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

DavePage
Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

6 posted 2005-04-16 05:54 PM


Sounds like you're being

Court 'in' a dew many ways

Nice words

dave

yv
Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574

7 posted 2005-04-16 06:05 PM


It's irreverance and simplicity is what makes it so satisfying.  I enjoyed this poem.  It brought a hazy smile on my face.  Thanks for that nakdthoughts.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #35 » Swirling Minds and Tired Finds

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary