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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-04-15 07:17 AM


Present

The present is a misty mime
It’s neither past nor future time
But stays within the realm of now
In essence it’s a holy cow

I cannot stand on either one
The first gone the other not done
In other words I walk a mist
That passes yet does not exist

I do not understand the form
Yet I was born and it’s the norm
It worries me and plagues my mind
There seems no answer I can find

It is the alter of my seem
It is my life yet seems a dream
It tells me I do not exist
Except in time within a mist

Before complete and bittersweet
A mist that forms the obsolete


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bslicker
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state of mind
1 posted 2005-04-15 07:28 AM


Enjoyed
always great reading you first thing in the morning, puts a smile on my face.
bernie

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Bernie Slicker

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-04-15 07:51 AM


kinda could be compared to a sort of giant ultrasonic nebulizer, couldn't it?

Intreging my friendly poet...very interesting!  Smiles and hugs...Happy Friday

scorpio
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3 posted 2005-04-15 07:55 AM


Well done Sy.  Much enjoyed.

believe in what your heart feels...

Sunshine
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4 posted 2005-04-15 09:31 AM



Your presence is a present,
m'friend... and I so look
forward to every morning's
poem wrapped in silk.







Kahlil
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5 posted 2005-04-15 09:45 AM


Sy:  
I enjoyed opening your Present
of time within a mist.

Good day to you.

K

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6 posted 2005-04-18 03:30 AM


you bring such joy
   trying to catch up here
       been gone awhile

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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