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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Rusted, busted, dilapidated fallen down, tumble down. Dont want to please anymore, alone to see, nothing in me now, given up on(love), to see all. The rain wiped from my eyes, shades of grey i see intently, time for me to see everything. No rush now, just walking dreaming streets, going nowhere and happy to be here or there. Sympathy for the afflicted, time to lay my pen of love aside, dont know if i'll pick it up again. People dying of poisonous smoke, seeing dead friends in living people, time no master of me. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
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what I most liked about this, is, at least your dreaming streets when most in this heartbreaking situation, cannot view anything, kinda stuck in limbo for a time.... I liked this...thank you for sharing. |
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