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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2005-02-18 01:09 PM

what is it you fear?
faceless names in rhyme?
ambigious prose of love
now lost when your heart
was absent with mind and soul?

Why should the comfort of
blue glare ahce your recesses
when these are ghostly places,
intangible fairytales over no
sooner begun?

do you remember yesterday?

flip a coin, I leave or stay

while you found the road to
self-discovery I found
retreat in the mind share of
many an illusionary
blanket of false warmth
yet outside was so much colder
yes, in your eyes so much colder

but that was yesterday
my muse is yesterday

tell me,
why fear the man of my dreams
when I now know,

he is you?

~tier
12/04

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2005-02-18 01:54 PM

This is one of those that reads so intimate that I can't help but feel like it's a message for one, but dear lady, there is so much here to which so many of us can relate.

I like that you ask the question and then turn it inward.

Nicely done, as always tiers

(and btw? I attended an anime' convention--drop me a line, I'll send some pics if you like

)

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2005-02-18 02:37 PM

Thanks Serenity! I will be in touch.

~tier

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-02-18 07:57 PM

Why should the comfort of
blue glare ache your recesses

~*~

Made me think of not just
computers, as most might...
but that blue night overtone
of lights off, tv on,
keeping the mind wandering
to keep the mind
from
confronting...
truth...

Well done, Tier...

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

4 posted 2005-02-18 08:01 PM

well done tier~

well said SUNSHINE`~

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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2005-02-20 12:48 PM

Talk about a heart beating openly upon a blue screen...~sigh~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2005-02-23 08:28 PM

Why should the comfort of
blue glare ahce your recesses
when these are ghostly places,
intangible fairytales over no
sooner begun?

So many questions without answers, I don't care to know.

As always, I so enjoy reading you Tiersdin~

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