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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-04-12 09:46 PM



use me abuse me
I knew I ment nothing
to you. Just some rag doll
to be thrown around to satisfiy your
manly needs.

confide in my best freind yes make
her feel wonderful and me alone
don't even give me your freindship
just leave me out in the cold.

rain pours down on my face and my hair is
soaked your there cloaked in your robe of
rigiousness as you swarm to her side as the
freind she always wanted in a male while I'm
here in the bitter cold fading away would you even
care if I died today?

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2005-04-13 03:52 AM


sometimes I feel this way too
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2005-04-13 04:27 AM


NIce writing...to allow ones self to be used is to accept the realization that it will go no farther...and sometimes I don't want to accept that fact...James
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
3 posted 2005-04-13 02:04 PM


yea at least my eyes are opening up slowly

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


Cloud 9
Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980
Ca
4 posted 2005-04-13 02:30 PM


James, you are so right.

Fox
It's a shame you are going through this....me too. I'm feelin this one.

Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
5 posted 2005-04-13 03:51 PM


it's the thing we called life it sucks but you gotta have the good with the bad. wish i had more good then bad these days

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
6 posted 2005-04-15 11:10 PM


Wow, that cuts deep... once again, all too familiar in a sad, recent way.  HugZ

Brian

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
7 posted 2005-04-16 09:14 PM


Don't let any man use or abuse you. Take care of yourself, and stay safe.
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