Magnus
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
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2005-04-10
11:32 AM
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My lady...ever faithful to you, your needs. I watch from below your room, always. Though cold, hungry...I shall not fail you. For you...you dearest lady... are my life.
Even as the sun sets beyond the mount, I am here..here below, I'll not leave. For leaving hurts me so, I can not. I am here...here I shall ever remain.
You, your smile, flowing auburn hair... The softest lips of all the land before you. Shoulders, gracefully hidden beneath silk. The swell of your bosom taunting me.
A name....if only I were allowed to say.. I would proclaim my love, by your name. Could I...I certainly would....for all time. For the beauty of the word is indescribable.
Rest each night...know that you are safe. Know that beneath your tower...I....I am here. Sleep in dreams of love, for love awaits you. Let love take you to crystal falls to me.
I yearn to see you, to once touch your face. This feeling shall not ebb, does not wane. I vow to keep you safely in my arms, as one. For...as one...love is complete...eternal...
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Barry J. Tackett
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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
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2005-04-10
11:45 AM
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Chivalry is not dead as long as Sir Magnus lives!
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Magnus
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
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2005-04-10
11:55 AM
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And dear EA, as long as there are ladies such as thee, chivalry has a place... Thanx!
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Nightshade
Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
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2005-04-10
12:04 PM
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Rest each night...know that you are safe. Know that beneath your tower...I....I am here. Sleep in dreams of love, for love awaits you. Let love take you to crystal falls to me.
*sigh* Mmmmm *sigh*
hugs, Chris "The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze." Gustavo Adolfo Becquer
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Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
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2005-04-10
12:11 PM
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Ohhhh...*SIGH*
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Marge Tindal
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
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2005-04-10
01:43 PM
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Magnus~ You can 'archive' me anytime !!!
Love it~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))><
Email noles1@totcon.com
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garysgirl
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
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posted
2005-04-10
02:03 PM
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Very, very romantic, Barry. Of course this lady loves it!! Hugs, Ethel
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longte
Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199
Australia
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2005-04-10
07:33 PM
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From a cave so dark inside dragon watched the last brave knight spread lost words to ladies fair saw some chivalry was there. Thought maybe we'll have some fun so look out to the setting sun See the Glimmer rising high A dragon seeks the last brave knight
Just read quite a few of your poems Good stuff PeterLive It
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Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
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posted
2005-04-10
09:17 PM
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Absolutely breathtaking! I hope all is well with you, Barry.
Take care.......SueI am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins
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TexUS
Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228
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2005-04-12
07:30 PM
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Love the passion in this. Enjoyed this beautiful write!
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Sadelite
Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519
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2005-04-12
09:48 PM
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an oldie, but a goodie for sure! Thanks for bringing it back!
sadie
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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2005-04-13
03:36 AM
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*swoon*
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suthern
Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
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2005-04-13
09:57 AM
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Chivalry AND devotion... and absolutely beautiful!!! *S*
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