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Beki
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0 posted 2005-04-08 10:00 PM



Confused

Sometimes
you are exactly what I need.
Our years together
left an easy understanding between us;
I fit just right beneath your arm
and when I 'm lonely
your presence here can ease the ache.

Sometimes
I want more than this easy friendship.
I need the comfort of skin on skin,
to cool my fevered blood with you.
But something in me holds me back,
cannot commit in exchange for love.
There are some hurts that haven't healed,
some fears that are not put to rest,

some dreams my heart still can't let go.

4/08/05

© Copyright 2005 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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1 posted 2005-04-08 10:15 PM


Lovely words

Dave

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2 posted 2005-04-09 12:03 PM


"There are some hurts that haven't healed,
some fears that are not put to rest,

some dreams my heart still can't let go."


understanding this very well.....

Beki
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3 posted 2005-04-09 04:49 PM


thanks so much Dave, and Sea, I am glad you could relate
ThUnDeRkYsS
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4 posted 2005-04-15 11:20 PM


Oh my, this expresses something very powerful one must experience to understand, and that I do.  Very touching, wonderfully written.

Brian

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5 posted 2005-04-16 06:05 AM


understand this one

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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