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Open Poetry #35

A World Without You

CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2005-04-07 12:43 PM

A World without You - such unthinkable thought
- Yet, should a man thus think and allow the pain
Of such anguish upon his heart be wrought -
All else that exists, shall exist in vain.
Without You - the World is but stone and dust,
Devoid of life and love and passions’ thrall;
The fire that burned is choked in the gust
And the World is an empty inert ball.
Oh, Woman, without You the Sun may still
Sear its rays into the desert sand —
But what of its heat? - when unceasing chill
Tightly grips the heart in its frigid hand:
Though a man may be the reaching spire
— You are the Temple of Eternal Fire.

CG

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-04-07 12:49 PM

Liking this one
a LOT...

Loved the voice of it...
and yes, even
heartfelt passion...

Thank you!

CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2005-04-07 12:52 PM

Thank you, Lady Sunshine...

Though I did have to correct a small, yet critical spelling error....LOL

CG

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-04-07 01:33 PM

well written, powerful passion

CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2005-04-07 06:05 PM

Thank you, passing shadows, for the words of appreciation.

CG

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2005-04-07 11:08 PM

The sadness, the feel of desired longing, of ache of heart and soul, this stirs deep within me~

I loved this one!

~ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

6 posted 2005-04-07 11:18 PM

Great write with captivating flow.

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

7 posted 2005-04-08 05:14 AM

Enjoyed this..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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