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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2005-04-07 04:28 AM


Snaking in, children
rosy red cheeked,
white and red
hooped shirted, huddled
together in anticipation.
Clouds race above,
some swift, below
more meander sedately.
ball kicked to
commence the game.
Onions salivating aroma,
moving among the
crowd like invisible
mist, filling nostrils.
Golden copper edged
clouds erupt at
altitude, frosted hands
clap good play.
Crowd cheer as
one from the
awaited goal scores.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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1 posted 2005-04-08 01:42 PM


Nice homely one

Dave

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-04-08 04:57 PM


where do you get the inspiration?

you are growing

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