Snowflakes #90 (Reassurance)

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Snowflakes #90 (Reassurance)

majnu

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since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

0 posted 2005-04-07 04:09 AM

#90 (Reassurance)

The moments of my life pass before I can take them and extract what life they hold - I am depressed.

But in the morning, Your sun rises,
And in the evening, Your stars twinkles.

Then I return to the ancient wonder;
The memories you placed in my blood still strong.
And I am a child wondering at the light dancing through the clouds on its way down to touch me on the head - much as Your gentle hand in blessing.

Then I am reassured that the one moment for which I was placed here shall redeem all those that were lost.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

1 posted 2005-04-07 08:12 AM

Wow. Simply, profoundly wow. Very beautiful with great imagery and flow. Gotta archive this...

"Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-04-07 08:15 AM

whewww, touched my heart and made my eyes water...(happy tears)

Profoundly warming

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

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West Coast

3 posted 2005-04-07 08:33 AM

a pleasure to enter this space in words
enjoyed it maj'

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

4 posted 2005-04-08 08:41 PM

awesome!

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2005-04-08 09:12 PM

I weak for the imagery
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JUju

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

6 posted 2005-04-08 11:57 PM

Some wonderful thoughts here, my friend.
I enjoyed reading this tonight.

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