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Open Poetry #35

able bodied comfort

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-04-06 03:29 PM

when I feel my fragile
you offer me
a leg
to stand on

you have two-
you say
and don’t mind sharing
your understanding

and would a shoulder help?
to lean upon?
for yours are broad and
can bear my weight

you brace my tenuous
with solid backing
and tender consideration
of a giving heart

as I take your proffered hand –
falling into your comfort

s.A.t.

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-04-06 03:43 PM

lovin this

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-04-06 04:30 PM

Sparkles, this shines!!!

He sounds like a keeper!

Linda

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-04-06 04:41 PM

thank you my friends - and Linda - you always smile me when you call me sparkles -

hugs -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2005-04-06 06:33 PM

soothsin...you are one that one would love to be a leaning place for..come close often
and leave love on my texture

enjoyed this babe

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2005-04-06 07:39 PM

Lovely...James

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

6 posted 2005-04-07 06:35 AM

Hey Susan...this is a wonderful piece. It is great to read something upbeat when I feel so down. Thank-you my friend.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2005-04-07 11:59 AM

D - to lean along the long of you and know your understanding - mmmmmm - yes - thank you luv -

James - thank you for your eyes -

Kevin - am pleased if I could bring just a little bright into your shadows- am sorry you are blue - sending a 10,000 megawat smile your way to brighten things - hugs -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

8 posted 2005-04-08 01:34 PM

Nice one Susan.

Dave

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