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Kaoru
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0 posted 2005-04-06 04:04 AM



We walk on gravel
hand in hand
melding into eachother.

     We continue with conversation
     pretending we are unaware,
     and all the same.

Our numbers are weakening,
  two
   becomes one,
and we will not survive this way.

Tell me now
   that my suffering has been in vain.
That I have strived,
    and for nothing.

No one will remember me,
there is no reason to ask why
or how..

I will become you
and live forever.

© Copyright 2005 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-04-06 04:09 AM


good to see you Meg
how's the baby?

love the poem! I can relate

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2 posted 2005-04-06 09:56 AM


Well done Meg...yes..and how is the baby?

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2005-04-06 10:06 AM


Meg!! How are ya?

Leah send recent pictures?  

Loved the melding fusion in this. But I think once we have children we can't be forgotten...

  hope all is well...

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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4 posted 2005-04-06 10:08 AM


Meg!  Love this.  How are you and the little one!

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

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5 posted 2005-04-06 10:25 AM



It does seem like that...when we dissolve
into the needs of another, seemingly to
lose our own identity...

but yours stands strong, and your precious
little one will admire the strength and
integrity of her beautiful mother...


LeeJ
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6 posted 2005-04-06 10:43 AM


whewww, heavy duty and gave me chills, this rocked, and so do you Meg
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7 posted 2005-04-06 11:00 AM


interesting write, Meg, and adding a novel twist to the cliche 'two becomes one'
Aenimal
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8 posted 2005-04-06 01:34 PM


she lives?! bout time you wrote/posted
Enchantress
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9 posted 2005-04-06 01:37 PM


Loved this write Meg!
So good to see you posting again.
Take care of that little one.
~Hugs to you both~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

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10 posted 2005-04-06 02:28 PM


reading this, i felt suffocated?

It's strange when, you think about someone, and then the next day they turn up. I'm sure thats happened before when i've been wondering how/where you were.

Always good to read you, always.

Love to Freyja and you. x


1slick_lady
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11 posted 2005-04-06 04:00 PM


well well well , it is about time you got back...i have missed you
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12 posted 2005-04-06 07:12 PM


Lady?

You can write...

I was hungry for something and didn't know what it was...and it was your words.


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