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Juju
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0 posted 2005-04-06 03:22 AM





All of these words
Make thier way on to this paper with ink
I try some how to level
And create some kind of link
Sometimes I mess up
And my mind is at its brink
Occassionally I try to hard
And I make a good poem stink

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-04-06 03:43 AM


you're doing fine..I love reading you
Juju
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2 posted 2005-04-06 08:50 AM


thank you,
Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-04-06 12:45 PM


this was one of those poems, that bring a smile at the end, knowing full well, all who read, have known this place to....hugs
Juju
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4 posted 2005-04-06 01:48 PM


Thank you

Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Martie
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5 posted 2005-04-06 05:53 PM


Juju

That trying to hard gets me every time!  I liked the thought that went into this.  Good write!

Juju
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6 posted 2005-04-06 08:32 PM


Thank you Martie.

Juju

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