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Ericc
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0 posted 2005-02-17 04:36 PM



This touch...

Air conforming to the
curve of our
existence.

The world breathing slight
against the skin.

And subtle fingers play as the wind...a brush so
slight it lingers as a sigh.

This holy contact.

Space making love to
what it defines.

While receiving what we
offer in return.


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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-02-17 04:44 PM


"subtle fingers play as the wind...a brush so
slight it lingers as a sigh."

How very beautiful this is Eric!!
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

suthern
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2 posted 2005-02-17 04:48 PM


This holy contact.

Oh, yes. *S* You have a gift for finding the words... for those times that leave us speechless. *S*

Susan
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3 posted 2005-02-17 05:49 PM


Wonderful!

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

DavePage
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4 posted 2005-02-17 07:41 PM


Excellent.

Captured the magic and the play of some fingers on the skin light as a breeze, heavy as a torrent.

Dave

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5 posted 2005-02-17 07:52 PM


But to be a blade of grass...
Lovely write Eric.  
TD

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6 posted 2005-02-17 08:17 PM


or perhaps a feather....floating lightly..

Well done Eric.

Tiersdin
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east coast
7 posted 2005-02-18 10:07 AM


Superb...


~tier

Sunshine
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8 posted 2005-02-18 08:14 PM



Silences speak long,
and low...
and when you make
contact...

you do it on whisper wings...

Margherita
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Eternity
9 posted 2005-02-19 05:17 PM


What you offer in return is your beauty ... and it casts ripples throughout space to touch All there is.

So very beautiful, dear Eric.

I love you.
Margherita

iliana
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10 posted 2005-02-19 05:25 PM


Transcendental.  Yes, that's what this is.  Much enjoyed, Eric.   ....jo
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11 posted 2005-02-19 06:24 PM


Beautiful!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000*    Journal!

BluesSerenade
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12 posted 2005-02-23 08:59 PM


Love this warm and tender caress you've written here.

A true beauty,  Ericc.

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with you
13 posted 2005-02-23 09:16 PM


you never, ever fail to make me smile and *sigh*
this is lovely

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14 posted 2005-02-24 10:58 AM


I can't believe I missed this one!
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