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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-04-05 06:55 AM

caramel is sand candy
my fingers applaude the bowl
of your virgin skin experience

you say hell oh
in dreams and other words
out of order for the proper

of your white gown
but that is only the color
and not how it clings

when damp and you say
I am a demon sometimes
with a fire hose trying

to fuel your unquenchable

_______________
dark

scribblenote: title..what do you imagine..yes that is it

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-04-05 06:56 AM

Don't let that caramel
fall into the sand...
too often...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-04-05 09:30 AM

I am a demon sometimes
with a fire hose trying

to fuel your unquenchable

umm? yeah.....
exactly babe.

damn you make me smile often!

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-04-05 10:32 AM

Smiling here D - what do I imagine? - hmmmmm -crawl inside my thoughts and get warm - but then again - you knew I would go there, didn't you? And I love the feel of my interpretation -

Morning -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2005-04-05 11:19 AM

thank you ladies...
_______________
sunshine you are a brightness to the day always..

_____________________

gs, you are so naughty, I think I want
much much more of your playful touch

__________________________

soothsin..you are love words with tickles
and I cherish you

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

5 posted 2005-04-05 11:44 AM

like a good bit of port complicated in even small portion.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

6 posted 2005-04-05 01:28 PM

Kinda like puttin' out fire with gasoline ain't it? You're always burnin' down the house, babe... and you can still carry that hose up twelve flights of stairs too. Damn.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2005-04-05 02:11 PM

friend majnu, thank you for the reply to this piece

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ahh indi...was hoping you might help me
with the gasoline or the hose?
thanks lady for the eyes

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2005-04-08 02:50 PM

Hey D?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2005-04-08 04:55 PM

awesome

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

10 posted 2005-04-10 02:48 AM

"the proper

of your white gown
but that is only the color
and not how it clings

when damp and you say
I am a demon sometimes
with a fire hose trying

to fuel your unquenchable"

wow....just wow....

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