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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-04-04 08:21 AM



Meetings never disappoint.
I recognized the smiles.
Waited little, impatient I,
for one who traveled miles.

So nice you see, reality
when complements the know.
I saw myself, in bit parts of
the she who carried glow.

Talk, I think, we'd outdo each
so much in common find.
I thank her for the time we shared,
though weather was unkind.

The wind whipped up, directions crossed,
confused as always, I.
Just ask another, he would know
North, South, East, West, we'd try.

A week of life that toughens one,
a day of comfort sought
in friendship met from words on line.
Real talk, a pleasure caught.

I thank you once again and hope
the day not be the last.
Behind the words, behind the smiles,
in blend of spirits cast.


M
(just in case ...I enjoyed the day)

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

1 posted 2005-04-04 10:00 AM


and I enjoyed your poem Maureen

mxx

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2005-04-04 10:28 AM



Meetings of some reacquaint
when smiles are part of life...
eases all the tension known
of struggles, and of strife...

Sounds like you had a good time, Maureen...
and I'm liking the new picture.


bslicker
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state of mind
3 posted 2005-04-04 12:30 PM


great write
bernie


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2005-04-04 01:35 PM


it's always nice to have a day away
for friendship

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