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WindWalker
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0 posted 2005-04-02 09:54 PM


What is this thing we label “sorrow” –
this bottomless pain of the heart
we feel at the worst of times?
Sorrow - emptiness - lostness -
here, nothing gives pleasure;
nothing satisfies; nothing –  
only the endless ache,
no comfort, no place to hide.

What to do when sorrow
suddenly claims a piece of life?
Are we helpless?
Victims of circumstances
that only time can heal?

Ah, but is time such a great healer?
Observe: do the old get better?
No, time does not heal – time kills –
a bit faster in sorrow!
What to do, then?

Sorrow is a double-edged sword,
one edge jagged and rough,
that is the selfish sorrow –
the one that leaves a raw cut
which every little aggravation
exacerbates;
one edge sharp and smooth:
this is the great Cosmic sorrow –
when one's sorrow is all-sorrow,
no longer a burden, but a part of life
and this sorrow, if understood
becomes the stuff of joy.

Sorrow may slice through the heart:
we choose either the murderer's blade
or the surgeon's scalpel.

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-04-02 09:56 PM


very true

nice way to see it

Midnitesun
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2 posted 2005-04-03 11:14 AM


Nice metaphor, a sharp clean write. I've never liked serrated edges, and I've felt both sides of that sword.
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