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Untangle ( Tanka for Serenity )
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Untangle ( Tanka for Serenity ) |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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winding round your words like satin ribbons through braids your grief becomes mine I will shoulder your burden help you untangle your mind . . . Chris Barker April 2, 2005 hugging you Karen |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am laughing through tears, and no dearheart, not at your lovely poem, it was just...well as I read this: "help you untangle your mind" I remembered a poem I wrote once that referred to my mind as the world's largest ball of twine. *giggling and sniffing* Maybe we could hire a crew from Home Depot or something?  and hugging you too  thank you thank you thank you dear friend and sis. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
lol....well at least it was "the world's largest" and not just "golf ball sized."  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Chris....you're heart is lovely!! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou so much Martie. Hugs. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen? Love you lady~  You are in my heart and my prayers. Chris? You know I love you. C'mere.. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a lovely tanka, Chris. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Nancy Lee .. love you too!  Sue - thankyou sweet one. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Chris, your compassion ~ and talent! ~ is showing! God bless you for writing this for the Serene One ~ and God bless her for maintaining her sense of humor through the most trying of times. Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Linda. Yes, she certainly is somethin' that Serene One. We wuv her! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely write for a beautiful lady |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dixie - thankyou and yes she is. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Huggin you Chris and thanking you for this. Hugs Karen.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Chris, your words are indeed a balm... and the braiding of them was with gentle hands... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Donna & Karilea, thankyou both and gentle hugs. |
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