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Open Poetry #35

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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2005-04-02 03:24 AM

Tint me with
your burnt tone.
Smoulder, incite my
luscious fervid hunger.
Gather my fragrant
spring blossom evermore
to your bosom.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-04-02 06:50 AM

This sizzles...very nice, Phil.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2005-04-02 08:41 AM

Smoulder... yes... I'd love this kind of wakeup... but settle for reading of it. *S*

I enjoyed! *S*

marcel
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

3 posted 2005-04-04 04:40 PM

smells beautiful!

Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

4 posted 2005-04-05 12:17 PM

i really do like this new place you're writing from. excellent. every word was important.

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

5 posted 2005-04-05 12:43 PM

smoulder..always did like that word

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

6 posted 2005-04-06 05:47 AM

Thank you everybody for the kind replies...

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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