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Midnitesun
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Gaia

0 posted 2005-04-02 12:21 PM



And so it has come to pass
that in the reality of today

I see you

more vibrant than any rainbow
more intense than a thundering tsunami

and

as fine a piece of LOVE in art
as ever painted itself
upon the canvas

of Life

and
even today,
your colors bleed true.

Vincent,
I shall always love you.

© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
1 posted 2005-04-02 01:26 AM


Much enjoyed this, your words paint quite a picture!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

ice
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2 posted 2005-04-02 08:04 AM


This poem was delicious,
I had it for breakfast.

__________ice
   ><>

J.Samm
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Iloilo City, Philippines
3 posted 2005-04-02 08:05 AM


wow...i love how you cut the lines so that they emphasize certain thoughts...passionate write
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2005-04-02 08:11 AM


you are so versatile

I envy your talent

M

marcel
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az, usa
5 posted 2005-04-04 11:08 AM


beautifully and passionately sentimental.
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2005-04-04 01:39 PM


a touching write Kacy
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