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Verve
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore

0 posted 2005-03-31 10:38 AM




Therein lies a shrouded mind,
of thoughts unclear and forsaken.
Tempered by a Machiavellian heart,
of love restrained and hidden.

A silent respite,
tainted with careless words,
An honest moment,
impeded by senseless deeds.

Trapped in an ambiguous vault,
Surrendering to vague promises of reprieve.
Arise now from unyielding foolish slumber,
The truth herein holds the key.

Has Time stopped,
or has it been forgotten?
Will it forgive,
when you have awakened?

© Copyright 2005 Regina Ng C. L. - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2005-03-31 10:51 AM


"Therein lies a shrouded mind,
of thoughts unclear and forsaken.
Tempered by a Machiavellian heart,
of love restrained and hidden."

  well done!!! enjoyed.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Midnitesun
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since 2001-05-18
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Gaia
2 posted 2005-03-31 11:07 AM


a timely write
very well done

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