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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-03-31 08:01 AM


They're building a nest
for the world to see,

beneath the jaded moon,
they set up house
within the branches
that boast of leaves,

on this isle of madness,
when catastrophies
sour the morning news,

in full world view,
this reminder of such
how the heart could be,

love in its creation,
within the weavings
of a blooming tree,

they're building a nest
for the world to see.

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-03-31 08:26 AM


in all of life's travels, there no material thing...above all else, there is love, which covers a vast highway of interpration, emotions and meanings....

This was indeed, humbling and of great need...thank you

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2005-03-31 08:29 AM


As usual, you find the strikingly beautiful and most simple pleasures to bring us a reality of vast proportion.
Loved this.
TD

choshi
Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184
New York
3 posted 2005-03-31 09:38 AM


In a crystal sky
a fading diamond moon wanes,
as chickadees return-
nesting beneath the porch eaves
as always, despite the world's trevails.


Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 2005-03-31 09:40 AM



And the sounds fill the air...

Enjoyed this very much, Michele!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
5 posted 2005-03-31 12:12 PM


"In full view"

yes...

Oddly, I know what you were writing about but it made me sad...

anyway, you always write beautiful pictures.  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
6 posted 2005-03-31 03:09 PM


so filled with hope - lovely -

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
7 posted 2005-03-31 07:44 PM


My God, you know, I adore this so much Michele because you have displayed beauty and love exactly as it is meant to be shown.

(I heard them, too, it made me smile)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
8 posted 2005-03-31 07:45 PM


well done!
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