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The River
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The River |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The River That part of river that is me Flows into an endless sea It washes on the sands of time And siphons through the grit of grime It lands upon the morning’s dew And then becomes a part of you The changing of the changing change Who knows what path it will arrange? Homogenous the parts prevail Scattered are the atoms sail To form within the earth once more The ever changing of its core And though I throw my seining fetch It is not fine enough to catch The essence of paternity Or pulse of its eternity I am a stranger passing through And very limited my view |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I am a stranger passing through And very limited my view hello stranger  just a wink in time as we all are |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well sir, you have no idea, what your poetry has meant to me.... extending hand in warm friendship.... Hello, happy to meet you and good morning...smiles and hugs |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Perhaps limited now, dear Sy... but oh the things that you have seen! Good morning, m'friend... sending  and  your way... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Your view is most insightful Sy. Keep those words flowing. believe in what your heart feels... |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Sy, your "very limited view" is certainly all-encompassing as you point me toward the infinite....~P |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
How expansive! ~ and if your view is "limited", then I must be downright blind! Spring morning hugs, EA  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh to view the world through your eyes Sy! Excellent morning read. Too late for tea? I think not. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Could you send some of your talent on those drops that come my way? *S* You may consider your view limited, my friend... but I sure do enjoy sharing it! *S* |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
The part of the river that is me is happy to know the part of the river that is you. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
Wonderful, Heart touching. Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wonderful write! Eric |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Your river runs mighty! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
aren't we all? thanks for sharing your view with us |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sy, this is so beautiful. I have always enjoyed reading your poems. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Some days the river runs swift and some days slow. Yesterday was a swift one. I thank you all your read and lovely comments. It is always an up for my day. To all  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you dear. |
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