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It's Where I Go |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Recluse overdose Catatonic surreal bathing in Warm glimpses or’r eyes of memory Musing, of what is to be…. Observe, there look, deciding flesh Inkwell of iris… Torrential burning…obese pylon Where darkness is the survivor Voted off the island… Sediments of Shenandoah Emerald mossy dreams Throwing on a dress of reckless morphine Drinking metaphysical shadows Skipping in-between Mascots the haunting idealist Showing their infinite faces “Come to me”! I scream, in meditation…. Daughters of bedside titans Peppered in hushed retreat Going inward where my mother started Strong-willed lifeblood threading Flippant enigmas leafy Newborn robin with unsure looks Like a fragile dream come true Growing into light, dancing inside Where no one looks~ On occasion, slight becomes dexterity In lighted particles, blazing fumes of chenille Turning like innocent polish Submitting fibrous moments of menopause Harvesting process…succulent cause Oh….. Hold me close, voice of bones Joys of life, borrowed birthstones So that I may never forget Falling down in this filtered daybreak Inhaling dusting warmth What is unconditional wine, cool and fresh? Detach me…from earth, from parrots of death Drink of this grace, this quiet simile Sound, focus, of Oceanus ecstasy Charismatic sacred grains Pressing brief moments mingling…. Olympian method of Zeus Running back and forth across my searching Dare me to touch Listening to tranquil seasoning Where Clotho probes stellar Insight searches me….like Lachesis Interpretations of unknown words Breaking down the walls….. Will is more direct Walking through where imagery joins Visions, love, & loyalties loins Velveteen sky of night time Hold me endless vein… In your gambled winnings… Where I may articulate Athena It’s where I go… |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Love the paintbox of your mind Lee...incredible writing here..thank you.. Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh….. Hold me close, voice of bones Joys of life, borrowed birthstones So that I may never forget Falling down in this filtered daybreak Inhaling dusting warmth ~*~ Dang it... I cannot explain it, but I'm keeping it...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You serve a mean mess of beans this morning. Good morning sweety. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow-Wee! Great write Lee J. JL  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Newborn robin with unsure looks Like a fragile dream come true Growing into light, dancing inside Where no one looks~" Pure poetry..love this Lee..a keeper! Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sediments of Shenandoah Emerald mossy dreams Throwing on a dress of reckless morphine Drinking metaphysical shadows Skipping in-between Mascots the haunting idealist Showing their infinite faces “Come to me”! I scream, in meditation…. oh boy.....I know this... I'm KEEPING this one. forever..... I really want to care, |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked this one alot. I loved the anology and metaphore. I liked this one alot. I had to red a few times in certain sections, but that is actually good. That is my issue. I loved the flow alot too. It had a nice style. LOts of love JUju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Dautz Write Member
since 2004-11-16
Posts 96 |
Oh….. Hold me close, voice of bones Joys of life, borrowed birthstones So that I may never forget Falling down in this filtered daybreak Inhaling dusting warmth Wow! Just Wow! dautz |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Where I may articulate Athena" ~ Lee, you articulate all the gods and goddesses through your bigger than life poetry!  Linda |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!!! Eric |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Adding another, wow! |
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