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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2005-03-30 02:31 AM



You set my mind as ease how you
trace your fingers upon my mouth
and work your sweet strength upon
me

Time lingers through my head when I'll
see you again,your smile your laughter
it pains me that it may very well be lost

To not see you again is to not see the sun
I shall wittle and die like a rose without
the light

Like a rain forrest without the rain
I to shall cry like a weeping willow tree


My mind forever will not be at ease for
I fear I have lost you forever.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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Gaia
1 posted 2005-03-30 10:04 AM


An appropriate title for the sentiment conveyed.
Sadelite
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2 posted 2005-03-30 10:34 AM


"You set my mind as ease how you
trace your fingers upon my mouth
and work your sweet strength upon
me"

I have never understood how one can give an other such strength through soft actions, but glad it happens!  You've described it well here.

      ~sadie

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3 posted 2005-03-30 10:15 PM


Forever....is a long, long time. We're only half-way through the beginning of it now....

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JamesMichael
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4 posted 2005-03-31 01:41 AM


Nice...James
Foxyoasis
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5 posted 2005-03-31 02:40 AM


ty

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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